Like last year, I am using a grid to plan my scenes. I am
finishing those up early this week. I’ll let them percolate a couple of days
and tweak them. Then, early next week, I will print off the scene grids and
affix them to 5x8 cards, one scene per card.
I came up, initially, with ten key scenes. From there I
built out on either side to create scenes leading up to and leading from the
key scenes. I ended up with ~40 planned scenes that way.
Here are the 10 Key Scenes for It’s a Dog’s Life:
1. Kitty and
Maudie are walking behind the grocery store when Maudie is distracted by a
neighborhood dog friend. While distracted, a pallet of dog food falls on them and kills Kitty.
2. Kitty can’t
accept she is dead, so she becomes a walk-in to the still-live body of Maudie,
the dog who resists the effort. They negotiate a sharing arrangement. She teaches
Maudie spoken vocabulary.
3. Maudie finally
released from vet hospital and Kitty/Maudie come home where Kitty tries to let
them know she’s there.
4. Kitty tries to
adjust to her new reality: eating dog food, limited communication skills, and watching
the family slide into poor eating habits and loose supervision. Worst are the
casserole ladies vying for husband Robb’s attention.
5. Waiting at
door when Calista her daughter breaks curfew. She breaks up a necking session
with a boyfriend Kitty hates.
6. Helps son
Brian with homework assignment for science report. She teaches Maudie to
read/count.
7. Maudie fed up
with sharing and wants her body to herself. Tries to boot Kitty out. Kitty
resists because she’d be finally dead.
8. Family starts
calling her “Mom” because she involves herself in everything about their lives.
She gets peace from that.
9. Dad finally
gets a serious girlfriend Kitty grudgingly accepts after Maudie chides her for
selfishness.
10. Maudie and
Kitty settle into their life but Kitty realizes Maudie is pregnant. A sequel
maybe???
Each day of NaNoWriMo, I will type one or two scenes from
the cards I made. That way I will complete the novel easily before November 30th.
This year I am adding in two other components. Before I
begin each morning, I will read over what I wrote the previous day and do some
edits and revisions. This is because I want to have the novel in pretty decent
shape by November 30th to enter it into a contest run by One-Book
Arizona. Deadline: November 30.
The second piece I am doing that is new this year is when I
finish for the day, I will put in italics at the end any
questions/thoughts/issues I want to be addressed in upcoming pages. These will
be the “hot off the press” issues that I am dealing with in my mind as I write.
These two pieces will serve two functions: 1) they will get
me into the novel again pretty quickly, and 2) they will keep me focused on the
story so I am not as likely to stray.
Here are some of the early scenes that, as of now, I plan to
write the first few days:
Scene
|
Where
|
Who
|
When
|
Point of scene
|
What happens
|
1
|
Store
back lot near home
|
Kitty,
Maudie, truck driver
|
mid-morning
on a week day
|
Kill
Kitty but not make it too awful (absurd death)
|
Dog
food truck accidentally dumps pallet of dog food on Kitty and Maudie while
the dog is checking out a male dog of interest
|
2
|
Store
back lot near home
|
Kitty,
Maudie, truck driver, police, paramedics
|
mid-morning
on a week day
|
Show
Kitty as a walk-in soul who will still be part of her family. If she went
into one of the other people, she’d be separated from them.
|
Kitty
panics when she realizes she is dead & the dog is gravely injured. She
slams her soul into Maudie. The dog resists her but is too weak to fend Kitty
off entirely. She hangs onto her body, too.
|
3
|
Vet hospital
|
Kitty/Maudie, Vet, tech, Robb, Brian,
Calista
|
Early
afternoon, day of accident
|
Kitty isn’t hurt in mind, but she is
frantic about how to let the family know she’s alive
|
Licks
family members, whines, as she tries to let them know who she really is; they
take it as sweet she knows them; worried about her pains
|
4
|
Vet hospital
|
Tech, Kitty/Maudie
|
One week after the accident
|
Kitty
shows her human side
|
Tech
spills coffee and she laps it up while he gets a towel; doesn’t suspect the
dog; happens again so tech slips her coffee everyday thinking it’s a weird
side effect of anesthesia or the pain
|
Any comments? Suggestions? Concerns? Please comment below so
I can adjust if I need to before writing! Thanks so much for any help you can
give!
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