This post was originally published yesterday on “Parsley, Sage, and Rosemary Time” as
will others to be cross-listed this month.
Some call it NaNovember. Some call it #$*&!^%. Or perhaps they use the
more popular NaNoWriMo.
No matter what
label (epithet?) you use, National Novel Writing Month is a time to remember. And
dread. And anticipate. And gleefully romp around in.
Re this blog, likely,
as November progresses, I will not have long posts, just short ones and updates
on progress once NaNo begins on November 1st.
I will dual post some
days on “Write Away” (my writing issues blog) since the posts will be about my
new culinary mystery and the writing
process. Hey, that way you only have to read one blog and get credit for two
this month!
I rarely struggled
with planning my culinary mysteries in the past, but this one was difficult for
me. I had trouble imagining, at first, my 10 key events (and ended up with 11
weak ones), and other elements that I use when planning my mysteries. Why is
that, I asked myself as the deadline approached and I didn’t have a single
scene card done?
I was scared.
What if I was
dried up with no more stories to tell and only clever titles to toss out? What
if I had a great premise and concept but not enough stuffing to prop up the
saggy, soggy middle.
Where’s the
tension? What are the characters’ motivations? Omigosh, “stuffingf” like that
was missing. Big problem when you’re writing a mystery.
Enter a couple of
brainstorm sessions with fab crit partner Sandy Bremser, and voila. I broke through the fear. We
identified the major flaw (there are numerous big other ones we found, too) and
brainstormed fixes. After the first session, I generated 6 scene cards. I got
in another 10 after the second session. I am nearly at the halfway point (I
usually create ~40 scene cards).
Now I know how the
novel starts and how it ends, and I moved what I thought was a key scene in the
middle to earlier so I could have a scene there that has much more tension. I
created a bad guy, because, well, I didn’t have one before. Wow, Sandy! Thanks
so much.
So still behinder than I’ve ever been at this point in my NaNovember PlotOber planning sessions, but I can do this. I will have those scene cards done before Wednesday morning. And, for the kind of writer I am, that is a huge relief.
Bring it!
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